Tuesday, December 4, 2012

What is the BEST way to revise the sentence?
The echo came from far away. It scared me to death.
a.)         The echo came from far away, and it scared me to death. Grammatically correct!

******b.)         The echo came from far away and scared me to death.  Grammatically correct!
The answer is B because it is better to combine the predicates.

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